Date: Jul/13/19

Post Text: This is an okay ad. It does the job. Starting with the fire emoji is good because it grabs attention, then says it’s only X. “This guy is too stable” refers to the product, which took me a while to get because no one actually talks like that in English. “Mobile phone enthusiast here”–all of this reads like it was written in another country. (And that’s fine, but if you’re going to target an English-speaking audience, the least you can do is have a native speaker proofread the ad.) 

Headline: The Headline just describes the product. 

Description: The Description merely announces a limited time discount, but fails to specify the discount details or the amount.

Visual: The video is 30 seconds long, but the music is painful to listen to. It’s cheap techno, and the video features zero human faces. It’s got a lot of hands and phones and clamps, demonstrating how it works, but the video is boring and not engaging. 

Notes: The brand seems to have gone out of business. With ads like these, it should come as no surprise.

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